You must prove or back up statements with concrete evidence. I can not stress this enough when it comes to what you will expected to do in seventh grade. Chose a statement below and provide me with three pieces of concrete evidence.
Statements.....
Brian, in the story Hatchet, was terrified.
Sugihara, in the story the Passage to Freedom was kind.
Jake and Daniel, in the story the Climb or Die were determined.
Charlotte Doyle, in the story the true confessions of Charlotte Doyal was brave.
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Sugihara was kind man because of the following reasons.First,he gave money to the jewish boy so he could buy what he wanted.Second, he took the time to explain things to his son.Lastly,he defied his goverment and save about 9,000 jews life.
Charlotte Doyle was brave in the following ways. fist; she faced her fears and climbed the royal yard of the Seahalk. Second; evan though she was the only girl and the crew tried to persuade her not to climb she, she was persistant and climbed. Third; Charlotte Doyle slipped and got so scared but just kept on climbing on and on and on!:) :(
Jake and Daniel were determind because there lives there parents lives were at risk. They had to climb a mountain in a certain amount of time with zero water and almost frozen to death. When they were climbing the mountain they did not stop for a break even though they were exusted. That is why I think they were determined.
I think that Charlotte Doyle was was very brave. First, I think that you have to be brave to go on a boat with all men. Second, to climb up 130 feet is amazing for a man to do, but for a woman that is above amazing. Lasty, for a woman to work on a ship out in sea is unheard of, she could slip and fall or even to go over board. In conclusion I think that Charlotte Doyle is a very brave woman!
According to the evidence from the story, I know Sughihara was kind for the following reasons. First, he gave money to a young Jewish boy. Then, He risked his life and disobeyed his goverment to save the refugees. Finally, He would not allow his family to risk their lives to write the visas. It easy for the reader to see that Sughihara was kind, consederate, and brave.
In My opinion, Sugihara was a kind man for these reasons. First, He used all of his time to write hundreds of visas a day for months. Next, he disobeyed his government, risked his job, and risked his life to save other the other people. Lastly, he gave a Jewish boy a free toy because he did not have the money. These are the reasons why I think Sugihara is a kind person.
In the story The Girl Who Married The Moon both cousins are very brave, because they both were put in the cold water of the sea when they were little and never cried out. They also were brave enough to take the test and to trust moon.
Mr. Sugihara was kind be3cauuse he gave money to the little Jewish boy and had dinner with the boys family. He wrote about 9,000 visas.
Brian was teriffied for these resons.First, his all alone in the forest.Second, he got hit by porcupine needls.Lastly,he didn't now how to start a fire.
In Passage to Freedom Sugihara was a kind man in the following reasons.First, he gave money to a little boy in a store.Second, he wrote about 9000 visas for the people in Lithaunia. Third, he disobeyed his goverment to save many of peoples life's. Lastly, whenever his son asked a question he would take time to answer it, patiently. This examples show why Sugihara was a good man.
In the story Passage to Freedom Mr. Sugihara was a kind man for the following reasons. First, he gave money to a boy in the shop who did not have enough to pay for what he wanted. Second, he saved millions of lives by giving out visas to the refugees who needed them. By doing this Mr. Sugihara put his family in danger and went against his country. Finally, when his son would ask him a question no matter how tired he was he always took the time to explain everything to his son. Mr. Sugihara was a good man because of those reasons and many others.
In my opinion Sugihara was a veary kind man. Here are the reasons why I think he is; First he gave money to a young jewish boy who needed it.Second, he risked his life and disobayed his government to save the refugees from poland. Finaly, he asked for his whole familys opinion on what he should do. These are three reasons why I think he was a kind man.
Brian in the story hatchet was terrified about the crash on his way to his dads house. because of a porkupine brian got needles on his leg. He cried most of the time but later on he knew that crying wasnt going to help. so later on he looked around and tried to look for things to make a fire.After he made his fire he was happy he had made a fire by himself. I thought it was a good book because the author makes the reader understand the book.
In the story The True Confessions of Charlotte Doyle, Charlotte was brave because of the following reasons. First, she climed up the mast to the Main yard. Then, she fell off the rattlines and shen still climed down. Lastly, She jumped off the rattlines on to the deck. Those are some of the reasons that Charlotte Doyle is brave.
sugihara was a kind man
Challote Doyle was brave but also afrde to climb the Ratlines but she did well and at the end of the story she got what she wanted to be a crew member.
In the story Climb or Die Jake and Daniel showed determination for the following reasons. First, when Jake and Daniel were climbing they never gave up or said, "Lets climb back down." Second, when Daniel and Jake were climbing they never complained or whined. Lastly, when Daniel and Jake were knocking on the door and no one answered they thought of a solution and never gave up. In conclucion, Daniel and Jake were very determined to get there mission completed.
In the story the girl who married the moon, both cousins were brave because…
They were brave because when they were little they were put in the cold saltwater of the sea.
They were also brave by going across the sky with moon for a little while when one of the cousins opened her eye she found herself falling to the ground
Lastly, the first cousin was brave by going into moon’s storehouse without his permission and wandering off alone in the other world across the sky
sugihara was knid baecause he gave money to the jewish so can buy the thing wanted.then when he worte the the card he didnt let his wife help so she doesnot get in trouble.last she he saved about 9,000 jews.
brian was terrified because he cryed and was scared.sugihara was kind because he helped the little juish boy. they were cold but, they kept going.she was scard but she push to the top
Sugihra was a great kind man and ifi was a refugee i would do anything to get help from sugihara. I also think if i was him i could not do what he did.
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